IG1 Task 4 - Treatment for Corrupted

Treatment – ‘Corrupted’

Everyone knows a kind, and friendly neighbour. To us they seem to lead a relatively normal life; their routine consists of mowing the lawn, taking the dog for a walk and vegging out in front of the TV.  Following the story of a 32 year old man, ‘Corrupted’ is a thriller filled with suspense and excitement, which reveals the ugly truth of an unassuming bipolar-sufferer.
A car pulls up in a driveway on a street which seems full of life as a man steps out with a smile on his face. A tall man around 6 ft walks up the path wearing;  light blue jeans, a white short sleeved shirt and a black blazer with a black satchel over his shoulder. Showing the immaculate place he lives in where everything has a place, it seems like the man has a normal life just like everybody else on the street and in the world.
A simple everyday mistake made by the man, knocking over a cup of tea has set off a bad mood, he begins to switch as he starts to build with rage and anger by shouting and throwing the cup against the white polished wall causing it to smash all over. A sound of a thud from outside catches the man’s attention. In his rage he goes outside to find a little boy, Tommy Rider from across the road, fetching his ball off the grass and apologising for hitting the man’s car.
The man goes back into the house furious and pulls out a small note book which in a distance seems to be a diary, as he starts to plot against the small boy. A brief looking over the shoulder, looking on to the page where he seems to be writing, reveals slight sketches and brief notes which are not clear to the audience. As days go by the man’s mood has changed, so it seems. He begins to act slightly normal till he see the little boy on his own and pumps up Tommy’s ball. Drugging the Tommy Rider’s drink, he waits till night fall and puts him in his car and drives off. Arriving at a dark, abandoned house deep in the forest. He pulls up and takes Tommy inside. Giving him a change of clothing to change into he sends him on his way upstairs. As Tommy goes upstairs, the man goes into the kitchen and pulls out an apron from the drawer under the toaster. He then goes to lock all the doors and windows leading to outside.
Pulling out a cloth from the cupboard, the man takes Tommy down to the cellar where lay a dirty old mattress and an old wooden chair with restraints on the arms and legs. He encourages the boy to sit in the chair and straps him in. He bangs the cloth on the table and reveals several tools such as knives, hammers, saws, screw drivers, thin wire and pliers.  Each individual tool had dark, crusty blood stains on. He begins to slowly torture Tommy, until his depressive episode passes and he realises what he is doing. Running to phone the police and an ambulance to come and get him. He then gets rope and goes to a tree and hangs himself.

By Charlotte Bracken

IG1 Task 4 - My Short Film Propsal

Proposal

§  Genre – The genre of this film is a thriller as the key narrative uses tension, suspense and excitement.

§  Narrative – The genre of the film is thriller as it uses many different things which get the audience on the edge of their seats in hope of what may happened throughout the film. The main protagonist of the film is a man in his mid thirties, who never seems to be named but at the start of the film is portrayed as a kind, friendly neighbour. To the audience he is just a normal man as his house and lifestyle seems normal. But as time goes by, we start to begin to see a different side of the man. His moods change and he becomes angry, and then a small child becomes the main focus, recording the moves on the young defenceless child, planning it as the days go by, a serious yet sly kidnapping takes place as he is taken to a secret place where no one knows, more dark and mysterious. The parents of the child set out and search for him calling the police; however they have no leads on who may have taken him or where he may be.  

§  Target Audience – The target audience is mainly aimed at teenagers. The target audience is aimed at this particular group as many teenagers like that excitement and thrill that comes from a film, keeping them on their toes and continue to guess what will happen. Also being old enough to go in to see that film seems to be a privilege. Teenagers seem to set out to watch films which will scare them and give them that feeling of tension where they are on the edge of their seats.  It is educating them the dangers of the outside world.

By Charlotte Bracken

IG1 Task 3 - Moodboard

Moodboard 1




The general idea of a horror/thriller seems a very significant genre to do as there are many ways to go about it and it appealed to me. 'The Unborn (David S.Goyer, 2009)' is a film which can relate as it involves one main protagenist is being haunted by an unborn child. A child being a main part of the story which is similar to one idea I have, as well as the 'Changeling (Clint Eastwood, 2008)' as a child is the main focus of the film. Hauting images have been selected specifically for reasons as it gives ideas to create a scary, mysterious atmosphere which all relate to the key narrative.


Moodboard 2

 

This moodboard concentrates on the basic idea of kidnapping. There are two films which I have included images from as they both relate to the whole kidnapping key narative.

IG1 Task 2 - Understanding of Script Commissioning
















References Used

Webiste(s)

Date: 17/11/11
Article Title: e-Commissioning

2.      Website Address: http://4talent.channel4.com/extra/4SC
Date: 17/11/11
Article Title: 4Screenwiritng

     3.  Website Address:
Date: 17/11/11
Article Title: ITV announces three new drama commissions for 2011

Book(s)

1.      Book Title: Storytelling in Film and Television
Author: Kirstin Thompson
Page(s): 38
ISBN: 0-674-01087-6

2.      Book Title: Screenwriting
Author: Ray Frensham
Page(s): 5, 44
ISBN: 0- 340-85971-7

3.      Book Title: The Art & Science of Screenwriting
Author: Philip Parker
Page(s): 17, 57
ISBN: 1-84150-065-8


Magazine(s)


1.      Magazine Name: Media Magazine
Publication: December 2010
Article Title: It’s TV, but not as we know it
Page(s): 34

IG1 Task 3 - Initial Ideas Generations

Script Writing Generation

1. Found
An original screenplay concept by
Charlotte Bracken

Mystery: A private investigator teams up with a Chief of Police to find the mayor’s kidnapped daughter.

As the story unfolds, the private investigator discovers an unknown child with a helpful prostitute called Scarlet.

By the finale, they manage to return 6 weapons, winning the respect of the police and also recover and return the child unharmed back to the mayor’s safety.

Think Spider Man meets CSI: Miami.

2. Dimension
An original screenplay concept by
Charlotte Bracken



Science Fiction: A space alien teams up with a space alien to get revenge. 


As the story unfolds, the space alien is reluctant to associate with a district attorney. 


By the finale, they manage to destroy a number of computer networks, locate the aliens and win the respect of military leaders.


Think Jurassic Park meets Fatal Attraction.
3. Code Red
An original screenplay concept by
Charlotte Bracken


Romance: A super model teams up with a mathematics nerd to retire to Florida. 


As the story unfolds, the super model doesn't want to fall in love with a fundamentalist preacher who she once loved but found out he was sleeping with a super model. 


By the finale, they manage to rescue and lots of money, save the children and win the respect of their classmates.


Think Dumb & Dumber meets Ghost Busters.
4. Space Poppers
An original screenplay concept by
Charlotte Bracken

Mystery:A time traveler teams up with a airline pilot to clone himself.

As the story unfolds, the time traveler is reluctant to associate with a talking pet pig.

By the finale, they manage to break out of a bundle planes, prove their worth and win the respect of computer hackers.

Think Titanic meets Star Wars.

5. Bad Action
An original screenplay concept by
Charlotte Bracken


Mystery:A border agent teams up with a ex prize fighter to drive out the drug lords once and for all. 


As the story unfolds, the border agent is reluctant to associate with a mob wife as sheis not trusted. 


By the finale, they manage to hijack all of drugs that the drug lords keep, beat the bad guys and win the respect of their country.


Think Matrix meets Rambo: First Blood.
6. Betrayed
An original screenplay concept by
Charlotte Bracken

Comedy:A small town sheriff teams up with a real estate agent to get revenge.

As the story unfolds, the small town sheriff starts to discover the truth about a rookie cop.

By the finale, they manage to destroy all of cars, bring down the dirty politician and win the respect of their country.

Think Beverly Hills Cop meets CSI: Miami.